Explorer I mean the piece itself does look great, but it's not really fitting the theme here. It was supposed to be a giant windy maze, you cant really see that (or even that it's a maze in fact). Also the professor was supposed to be hairy, which you also can't really see.
What about loving to draw ? I guess the notebook in his hands slightly indicates he might've drawn something on it, but the main points being him being hairy and loving to draw that isn't so great.
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Caepos responds:
Thanks for the feedback. I see what you mean and I do agree that some points you stated aren't obvious on the first sight (e.g the wind) however I have to say that especially due to the composition and perspective of the illustration some things like the hair of the character could only be indicated (you can't see his face). As for the the maze again it's all a matter of perspective maybe a bird view would have been better to show the maze but I wanted to focuse my piece on the character and the altar a view from above would have restricted me even more (at least in my opinion). But I do agree I could have emphasise the wind even more with the direction of the smoke from the fire. But again thanks for the feedback I do appreciate it
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